語序與句式剖析
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日復1日地上班下班,平淡的日子便如流水一般在指縫中溜走了。早出晚歸的行色匆匆也令我無暇胡思亂想。
Humdrum days flow like water through my fingers as I go on daily trips to and from work—— early departure andlate return in such a hurry that little time is left for me to indulge in fanciful thought.
日復1日地上班下班,平淡的日子便如流水一般在指縫中溜走了。早出晚歸的行色匆匆也令我無暇胡思亂想。
Humdrum days flow like water through my fingers as I go on daily trips to and from work—— early departure andlate return in such a hurry that little time is left for me to indulge in fanciful thought.
網友的翻譯非常不錯,意思非常到位。從語言表達多元化的角度,我試著用淺顯的“詩歌” 語言,翻譯一下,與網友共勉。
I go to and get off work day after day,
and like running water the dull days slip away.
Early departure and late return in such a hurry,
leave me with no time to think deeply.
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