Now, I want to share one of my experiences with you. Yeah, it's something about one of my favorite sports——swimming. However, I have always afraid of swimming until I graduated from Senior High school. Now, I will tell you why I changed my ideas.
現在，我想與你分享我的一個經歷。是關于我最喜歡的運動之一——游泳。然而，高中畢業之前我一直很害怕游泳�，F在，我告訴你為什么我會改變我的想法。

When I was a child, I often went fishing with my father. Unluckily, an accident occurred to me one day. I fell into the river suddenly and I shouted to my father “Father, help! help!”（Of course, I hadn't learned swimming skills at that time.）Then my father jumped into the river and saved me from the river as quickly as he could. There was nothing with me but I have no desire to swim anymore. I just too scared to touch water in rivers or swimming pools. I certainly lost my courage. My parents wanted to teach me how to swim but I refused. When I graduated from Senior High school, I thought I should change something in my life. I was an adult and I should have courage to face all the things I used to be afraid. I should try to swim. I got over my frightening to learn swimming skills and I made it. Since then swimming becomes one of my favorite sports.
在我還是個孩子的時候，我經常跟爸爸去釣魚。不幸的是，有一天，我發生了意外。我突然掉進河里之后對著我爸爸大喊“爸爸，救命！救命啊。”（當然，那個時候我還沒學過游泳。）然后我父親跳進河里盡可能快地救了我。雖然我沒什么事，但我再也不想游泳了。我只是太害怕觸摸河里或者游泳池的水了。我失去勇氣。我父母想教我如何游泳，但我拒絕了。我高中畢業的時候，我覺得我應該做出一些改變。我已經是一個成年人，我應該要有勇氣面對我曾經害怕的一切。我應該試著去游泳。我克服了恐懼去學習游泳，最后我成功了。從那時起，游泳就成了我最喜歡的運動之一。

I prefer swimming in swimming pools than rivers. The reason is simply. First, it's dangerous to swim in rivers because my swimming skills are poor. Second, swimming pools have the locker room where I can change my business clothes to my swimsuits. If it possible, I would like to go swimming with my friends. 
我喜歡在游泳池里游泳多過在河里。原因很簡單。首先，因為我技術不好，在河里游泳很危險。第二，游泳池那里有更衣室，我可以換衣服。如果可能的話，我喜歡和朋友一起去游泳。